Interesting Tarot poem

gregory

What do you all think of this rather interesting Tarot poem ? Does it add anything to the cards - does she "get it" ?

It's by Paula Jennings.

Moving Inward, Moving On

Fool


The first card, the O, the circle
full of squirming space,
and through this sacred hoop the young fool leaps
into the young day,
radiant as a crocus,
inches from the cliff's edge,
on each foot, she hopes, a little wing.

Page of Cups

The fish jumped in the cup,
the fish swam
in my left eye;
there were pictures in the scales,
shutters of pearl opening for me.

The Devil

Jumps up and prances,
shakes a leg, shows how it's done.
You can focus on the yellow eyes
and feel your terror stretch
or you can go on down
past the cold mouth,
past the sharp arms with their prongs
reaching out to snag you,
the torso like a cliff, and then,
shudderingly,
furred haunches with your shame
barely hidden between them,
and you can get stuck here
while grown-up voices burn your cheeks.
You can do all this many times
but if you keep on down
you'll see hooves dancing,
drumming all the rhythms you ever wanted.

Two of Pentacles

Two worlds are tossed in air:
they fly on muscle and movement,
holding their course over and over,
faster, they are a lemniscate of light,
balanced on nerves and arms and eye.
They are the juggler's certainty
until she wonders
am I artist or deceiver,
and her worlds collide.

Ace of Wands

One-in-fire is will
gathered in a burning bud,
is red for fighting and winning,
throwing off a calyx rough as a cat's tongue
scarlet silk unfolding like a spring.

Moon

On the moonpath to the sea
old fears flutter from her in rags,
dark streamers,
but her mouth trumpets lilies
and her feet sing on the wet sand.
She wears her scars like brooches,
cool pearls,
and all her loves, embroidered
on her sleeve in runes and spirals,
glisten in the metal light.

Jester in monochrome,
she plays to this night beach.

Eight of Cups

There is a humming here,
a grey note.
This is the steepest dreamworld
and I choose to scramble down
through tensions locked at a high whine
to where light is white cloud cover,
low pressure storm glare,
and
losing
balance,
I am scattered.
I count my fragments: these are my feet,
these my hands, my head this sobbing
camera.
Sliding,
I plunge beyond language into my body,
to a grief so whole it feels like joy.
 

nisaba

I find it a little patchy, but that's probably raving jealousy in disguise.
 

Lunalyn

hi Gregory
the poem didn't really do anything for me.

your question - 'does she get it?' perhaps in a very offhand sort of way. but t somehow seemed haphazard or something.
lyn
 

gregory

That was what I thought. A friend asked if it "added" anything to the cards she was writing about...
 

kwaw

Paula From the Body of the Green Girl Jennings, or the very worst poetry in the the universe Paula Nancy Millstone Jennings of Sussex? Or another Paula Jennings altogether?

I like the lines:

into the young day,
radiant as a crocus,


and also:
She wears her scars like brooches,

though that line seems familiar for some reason.

I like to see tarot taken as a theme/motif for poetry.

The Association of Tarot Studies has published a book of poems inspired by the tarot by Shane Kendal that she might be interested in looking at - there is a preview at Lulu here:

From Motley Hat to Deathly Shroud:
http://www.lulu.com/product/paperback/from-motley-hat-to-deathly-shroud/5005309

I am developing a series of poems around the theme of tarot, and would be interested in what people think of Shane's and Paula's approach too.
 

gregory

Body of the Green Girl - as far as I know. I will have to ask. Given who showed it to me, I imagine so.

kwaw - you know who we are talking about, I think - and I will ask :D
 

nisaba

gregory said:
That was what I thought. A friend asked if it "added" anything to the cards she was writing about...
Oh. Well in that case, no. It doesn't add anything to my understanding of them.
 

kwaw

nisaba said:
Oh. Well in that case, no. It doesn't add anything to my understanding of them.

I would say too, that neither Paula's nor Shane's adds anything for me - not sure whether that need be the be and end all of any value they may possess (or not) however...

... I wouldn't be presumptuous enough to say mine do either!
 

gregory

The person who asked is not a tarotist... I will enquire further.