frelkins said:
[3P + 5S] Earth & Air are enemies. x weak . . .
If an Air-type question, the Air rips into the supporting earth like a tornado and leaves a gash of destruction; if an earth-type question, well, some tree branches might end up in the street. Creation, surrender. "It may be a bad day at work, you might not be in a position to keep some idiot from blocking your project so you may have to regroup today and try again tomorrow. And check the spec again, because there might be an error."
Thanks for doing this. Generally, you have the right idea and the core statements are good, but you are putting far too much into it and making a lot of unnecessary assumptions.
First, using elemental analogies like "air rips into the supporting earth like a tornado" can be very tempting as it is fun and creative, but can also become a trap. It gets in the way of straightforward information, and the analogy is not always accurate. Several people have tried such analogies when working with EDs - but take care. I suggest trying readings both with and without and see what actually works best.
In the first example, I'd stop with "It may be a bad day at work." How do you know that someone else is at fault, or that it will be better tomorrow, or that there may be an error in a "spec"? It seems that all these are assumptions you are making that are not there in the cards themselves.
[2C + 7 C] "Look for the one who really cares for you as you."
Advice, at this stage, is totally unnecessary, premature, and really only a platitude.
I notice that you assume that Wands & Swords will swiftly pass and that Water & Earth are long lasting. I haven't found this to be necessarily so.
[2C + 3P] "You and that new boyfriend of yours are creating the foundation of what could be a long-lasting relationship. Keep up the good work."
'Building the foundation of a relationship' is all that's needed at this point.
[5S = 10S] "could be +++ very strong or ++ strong, depending on how you determine how fast everything will happen"
Air does not mean that everything will happen and be over fast, and the strength of the pair has nothing to do with how soon it will be over. Strength, in EDs, is determined solely by the rules. Two cards of the same suit are +++Very Strong. Here they probably intensify action for 'ill'.
"You can regroup. This could pass quickly. So don't let yourself get down and be prepared to pick yourself back up when the circumstances change and the dust settles."
You are trying to fix things! This is certainly not what the cards say. You actually undermine the information by trying to make it better, when the 'better' is not actually in the cards.
[7W + 2C]"Fire & Water. Enemies. x weak. Both cards are ill-dignified." Good. And, even though the GD wouldn't read this combination, I like the idea of a lover's tiff. But, again, in your description you gave too much information, tried to fix things and fell into assumptions. How do you know they'll both be laughing later?
If you had kept it simple you would have done very well. I'd be careful of assuming that active and passive suits mean swift and slow. In fact, I prefer to not even use the term passive when talking about Cups & Pentacles as it tends toward misunderstandings of the cards.
I welcome any comments from others.
Mary