Get someone else to proof your website for you, there are still a lot of mistakes that I can see just glancing through it.
The coding on the template you used is really crappy too, I would highly suggest finding a new template. What I mean is that the navigation is unreadable because it overlaps the title because of the coding. Even if the website looks good to you in say, Internet Explorer, it may look very "messed up" to someone else in say, Firefox (what I'm using).
If you want I can make a website for you during my break, I would offer a very significant discount because you are an Aeclectic member (I can't do it for free though because I vowed not to do that anymore; I get completely overrun with requests if I work for free -- so you'll have to settle for paying a tiny bit to get one done haha).
I'll private message you with more suggestions when I get some time.
